The Kingdom’s only shopping mall, the BudgetMasher, sat above a vast stagnant swamp. The entire complex loomed like a village built on stilts over brackish waters. Normally having your prime retail area positioned over a fetid marsh would be a problem, but the fact was, the unwelcomed presence of snakes and mosquitos motivated shoppers to … Continue reading Princess Rachel Goes To Summer Camp (Chapter 5 – Voyage To Hell [I mean the Mall])
fantasy fiction
Ogres with Good Intentions
The following is an excerpt of content I'm considering for inclusion in my manuscript draft. In re-reading the manuscript, I found what I think is an unaddressed plot point should be filled to maintain coherence and consistency. See what you think. * * * * Surrounded by an escort of the horsemen of King Alric’s … Continue reading Ogres with Good Intentions